From 07ed00537f66fb75f2a4cc24efb97c3363f5e7b1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Seth Vargo <seth@sethvargo.com>
Date: Mon, 24 Jul 2017 15:11:17 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Add Kevin's copy changes

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 website/source/index.html.erb | 33 ++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/source/index.html.erb b/website/source/index.html.erb
index 880c8a5bf..1706c6adb 100644
--- a/website/source/index.html.erb
+++ b/website/source/index.html.erb
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ description: |-
         <h3>1. Declare Jobs</h3>
         <p>
           Users compose and submit high-level job files. Nomad handles the
-          scheduling, deploying, and upgrading of the applications over time.
+          scheduling and upgrading of the applications over time.
         </p>
         <p>
           This flexibilty makes it easy to deploy one container, dozens of
@@ -49,9 +49,9 @@ description: |-
       <div class="col-sm-6">
         <h3>2. Plan Changes</h3>
         <p>
-          With the built-in dry-run execution, Nomad shows what scheduling
-          decisions it will take, before it takes them. Operators can approve or
-          deny these changes to create a safe and reproducible workflow.
+          With built-in dry-run execution, Nomad shows what scheduling decisions
+          it will take before it takes them. Operators can approve or deny these
+          changes to create a safe and reproducible workflow.
         </p>
       </div>
     </div>
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ description: |-
         <p>
           Nomad runs applications and ensures they keep running in failure
           scenarios. In addition to long-running services, Nomad can schedule
-          batch jobs, distributed cron jobs, or parameterized jobs.
+          batch jobs, distributed cron jobs, and parameterized jobs.
         </p>
       </div>
       <div class="col-sm-6">
@@ -83,10 +83,10 @@ description: |-
         <span class="callout">Combine</span>
         <h2>Hybrid &amp; Multi Cloud</h2>
         <p class="lead">
-          As more organizations migrate to cloud technologies, the desire to
-          run in multiple datacenters and multiple regions becomes critical.
-          Nomad can span public and private clouds and treat all your
-          infrastructure as a pool of resources.
+          As more organizations adopt cloud technologies, the desire to run in
+          multiple datacenters and multiple regions becomes critical. Nomad can
+          span public and private clouds and treat all your infrastructure as a
+          pool of resources.
         </p>
       </div>
     </div>
@@ -101,17 +101,16 @@ description: |-
       <div class="col-sm-6">
         <h3>Hybrid Cloud</h3>
         <p>
-          Nomad can bridge the gap between the public and private cloud,
-          creating a unified interface for developers to deploy and run any
-          application on any platform. Easily run services across your internal
-          private cloud and external public cloud transparently to application
-          developers.
+          Nomad bridges the gap between the public and private cloud, creating a
+          unified interface for developers to run any application on any
+          infrastructure. Easily run services across your internal private cloud
+          and external public cloud transparently to application developers.
         </p>
       </div>
       <div class="col-sm-6">
         <h3>Multi Cloud</h3>
         <p>
-          As more organizations migrate to cloud technologies, the desire to run
+          As more organizations adopt cloud technologies, the desire to run
           applications simultaneously across multiple clouds increases. Nomad
           combines the power of all cloud providers into a single, unified
           interface for deploying applications and running services.
@@ -349,7 +348,7 @@ description: |-
       <div class="col-sm-12">
         <h3>Plan Changes</h3>
         <p>
-          Perform a dry-run execute to check application placement, scheduling
+          Perform a dry-run to check application placement, scheduling
           decisions, and visualize failures before they happen.
         </p>
       </div>
@@ -425,7 +424,7 @@ description: |-
       <div class="col-sm-12 col-lg-8 col-lg-offset-2">
         <p class="lead" align="center">
           The introduction contains a walkthrough guide, glossary, and a range
-          of examples to experiment with Terraform.
+          of examples for learning and experimenting with Nomad.
         </p>
         <p align="center">
           <a href="/intro/index.html" class="button primary">Get Started</a>